Thanks really! I appreciate the tips, I think it 
looks better now!

(now as I look at the old pic an hour later, I 
see how wry and asymetric I really drew it)

1. I know^^ I just marked the highlights yellow!

2. Nya... I wanted him to look cheerful^^; I was 
even about to draw a Chibi!

2b. Yeah, unfortunately true - I wanted a wry 
smile like "What's she up to now, is my Miyu 
drunk?" and screwed it up to an unreadable 
expression ;__;

3. Corrected both, looks better indeed!

4. Oops... let's say it's a two-part piece ;)

5. Ummm... you mean the thick orange line (I 
wanted to automatically attach "ka"... I'm 
thinking JAPANESE!!)? That's the 2nd shade! I'm 
aiming for a skill level equal to Requiem's ;)



As soon as I have the time (like cutting 
school...) I go for the cel (I HAD to draw an 
original douga, I love drawing dougas!)

Nyo^^
Ore-sama